Sunday, August 16, 2009

Metal Tiger Eat A Flower

Metal Tiger
You're a tough huge cat
prowling through the jungle
Feel the strength surge through your limbs
Let out a roar

Your big green eyes see everything
The colors of the jungle, vibrant
like light through a prism

Eat a flower
Smell the rain
Grab the earth and shake it!

© 2009 PhilM400


Blogger Beloved Haiku Dreams said...

So my friend we are Tigers. We both have such lovely stripes. Another great poem! You should check out my link list for places to post your work. One is Got Poetry. Com
There are some fine poets and poetry post there. Or try stopping at One Single Impression. It's really a very creative group.


1:03 PM  
Blogger philm400 said...

I checked out some of the links and found some great poetry. All the talk about structure gets me a bit worried. If it feels and sounds right I'm happy without thinking about it too much.

11:05 PM  

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